{"id":1934,"date":"2014-03-13T10:00:08","date_gmt":"2014-03-13T17:00:08","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/berkonomics.com\/?p=1934"},"modified":"2014-03-11T11:51:15","modified_gmt":"2014-03-11T18:51:15","slug":"the-inciting-incident-movie-scripts-tell-us-how-and-when-to-look-for-investment","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/berkonomics.com\/?p=1934","title":{"rendered":"The \u201cinciting incident:\u201d Movie scripts tell us how and when to look for investment."},"content":{"rendered":"<p><b><i>By David Steakley<\/i><\/b><\/p>\n<p>If you are a screenplay writer, you are familiar with the dogma of the inciting incident.\u00a0 In a movie, the inciting incident is the event at the beginning of the story which <a href=\"https:\/\/berkonomics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/David_Steakley.png\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-thumbnail wp-image-1936\" alt=\"David_Steakley\" src=\"https:\/\/berkonomics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/David_Steakley-150x150.png\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" \/><\/a>causes the hero&#8217;s life to be completely transformed and irrevocably changed, and which makes the whole story unfold.\u00a0 Companies also need an inciting incident, because, more often than not, you often will depend upon selling your story to someone.\u00a0\u00a0 What is the inciting incident for your company?\u00a0 How can you get to it more quickly and with less capital?<\/p>\n<p>Every good story has an inciting incident.\u00a0 You may not spot it at first. For example, ask yourself: \u201cWhat is the inciting incident in <i>The Godfather?\u201d<\/i>\u00a0 This one is tricky, because it doesn&#8217;t occur until 45 minutes into the film, when Vito Corleone is gunned down in the street.\u00a0 This event totally changes the life of Michael Corleone and makes the rest of the story happen.\u00a0\u00a0 Ok, now you&#8217;re an expert:\u00a0 quick, what&#8217;s the inciting incident in <i>Star Wars?<\/i><\/p>\n<p>The terminology is from the movie industry, but the concept applies to all stories.\u00a0 Every good story has an inciting incident. \u00a0I am father of four kids, tween to teens, and I<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_1429\" style=\"width: 203px\" class=\"wp-caption alignleft\"><a href=\"https:\/\/berkonomics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/10\/Basic_Berkonomics_front_cover.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1429\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-1429\" alt=\"From Basic Berkonomics: Available Amazon, B&amp;N,  berkus.com and booksellers everywhere.\" src=\"https:\/\/berkonomics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/10\/Basic_Berkonomics_front_cover-193x300.jpg\" width=\"193\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/berkonomics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/10\/Basic_Berkonomics_front_cover-193x300.jpg 193w, https:\/\/berkonomics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/10\/Basic_Berkonomics_front_cover.jpg 443w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 193px) 100vw, 193px\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-1429\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">From Basic Berkonomics: Available Amazon, B&amp;N, berkus.com and booksellers everywhere.<\/p><\/div>\n<p>sometimes kid them, as a seemingly pointless anecdote trickles to an end, with the capper \u201c&#8230;and then you found five dollars?\u201d\u00a0 This is amusing (to me, at least) because it points out that the story lacks an inciting incident.<\/p>\n<p>[Email readers, continue here&#8230;]\u00a0 Story seems to be an artifact of the human brain, and soul.\u00a0 It is a key part of what makes us human.\u00a0 Stories are the most important repository of wisdom, experience, knowledge, and learning.\u00a0 Story telling is often a key aspect of a great leader&#8217;s talent.\u00a0 For example, while Steve Jobs was abusive, rude, and unappreciative, he had what his colleagues referred to a reality distortion field.\u00a0 He told his team how it was going to be, and even though his story of what was going to happen seemed to be completely unrealistic fantasy, he made his team believe the story, and his teams of believers made it come true.<\/p>\n<p>I found myself explaining all this recently to a company team that was pitching me on its story.\u00a0 The company is building a website to match commercial tenants with commercial landlords.\u00a0 They told me all about why this is such a good idea:\u00a0 hard to manage price discovery in the commercial real estate market; \u00a0fragmented information about vacancies obtained from landlords and brokers; and the large scale of transactions.\u00a0 They told me about their expertise and their network of contacts, and their early customers, and the promising results so far.\u00a0 They wanted to come to pitch to my angel network.<\/p>\n<p>I told them they lacked an inciting incident.\u00a0 None of the angels in my group is likely to write a check without hearing and believing a story about how something dramatic is about to happen.\u00a0 The very best thing, I told them, would be to come back when the inciting incident has just happened, but the consequences have just begun to unfold.\u00a0 We talked about what this could be:\u00a0 major PR to drive tenants to the site; signing a deal with a major landlord to\u00a0 greatly increase listings; a scheme to source listings at massive scale from public data&#8211;there are a lot of possibilities, but they didn&#8217;t have that element.<\/p>\n<p>When you&#8217;re selling your company to potential investors, you have to work hard on your story, and the story doesn&#8217;t really begin until the inciting incident.<\/p>\n<p><i>Answer:\u00a0 In Star Wars, the inciting incident is Darth Vader&#8217;s attack on Princess Leia&#8217;s spaceship.<\/i><\/p>\n<p><b><i>David Steakley,<\/i><\/b><i> a past President of the Houston Angel Network, is a reformed management consultant.\u00a0 He is an active angel investor, and he manages several angel funds in Texas.\u00a0 <\/i><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>By David Steakley If you are a screenplay writer, you are familiar with the dogma of the inciting incident.\u00a0 In a movie, the inciting incident is the event at the beginning of the story which causes the hero&#8217;s life to &hellip; 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